Sunday, December 20, 2009

Jung Su's Poster

Hello, everyone!!
This is Jung Su from Thursday Class.
I changed my poster a little bit so please comment
what you guys think and what I need more for it.








Thank you ^^

4 comments:

Unknown said...

is the negative space on the right intensional?
I don't know if I like the two figures walking, I liked it better when it was just one figure

Olga Type said...

yeah the figure on the top doesn't really make sense to me. It should look like he's in power, but in this he looks the same as the bottom figure.

-Nana

Olga Type said...

I felt that way too.
Alrigt.. I have to fix them!!
Thank you guys!!

-Jung SU

Olga said...

Jung Su, you have pretty good comments on your new effort.

If you still have some energy, I would like you to play just with your bottom figure without that big shape that feels your poster. Just for now, you might go back to it.

What if you place your "bottom figure" tragic king in the middle of the poster instead of your type and "king in power" that you place diagonally also in the middle of the poster on the top of your tragic one, not diagonally, but horizontally also.
That would tell the whole story and the whole background fill with very condensed typeface title and author—sort of like like prison bars. If you want to try it, I will e-mail you ultra condensed fonts.

Olga