Tuesday, December 15, 2009
Goldilocks and the Three Bears part II
Eddy here, this is my redo of the story. I won't explain it just yet since I want to see if you guys understand the design first so please let me know.
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Hey its Rebecca, I like the idea that Goldilocks is kind of gambling her luck... I think that's the idea. The only thing that does not make sense is that she always picks the same thing she's not really leaving what she likes up to chance, she is in a way but I don't know if that's part of the story. Maybe there's a reason she picks baby bears stuff? Maybe you could make the dice with the paw prints only baby's?
i think this is a lot better than your last design... there's more of a concept. i think it's ok that all three bears are represented on the dice, because before goldilocks tries anything, she has no idea which one she is going to like.
-elisa
I understand this as one die is the choice of things to try (porridge, bed, chair) and the other picks whose belongings to try (dad, mom, baby). so in that way, its pretty cool.
I think you can approach the type in a more illustrative way. Or you can play with the space that its placed in to make it look more unified instead of just plopping in text. One of my favorites though!
-Christian
Thanks guys for all the input! I've been without sleep for 1 whole day now and I'm being to feel retarded. Then again I am sure most of you are in the same situation.
Rebecca: I actually thought about making all the bear paw prints the size of the little bear, but I am not sure if it would work with the idea since my idea is as you said, gambling with your luck. I will think it over since I won't be printing till tomorrow morning. I'll be posting again later.
Elisa: Yeah my last design was completely torn to shreds by Olga so I decided to completely abandon it.
Christian: Good point, I will definitely tweak the type some more to make it flow with the illustration. Thanks.
Finally, the Blog works!
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