Wednesday, March 16, 2011

Endgame Covers

Hey Guys and Girls it's Omar and these are my endgame covers. The last 4 are the revisions, and the idea is to focus on the relation between ham and clove. The first three were kind of vague just focusing on subtlties within the story so I changed the concept up. Feedback is always appreciated!

5 comments:

Olga Type said...

yo, i like the handy capped logo idea, play round with scale maybe that will make it crazy striking? but i do like the one that has the big logos in the center and type on the right hand cover.

goodluck, amie.

Olga Type said...

I adore the simple mens logo and handy cap logo. It shouldn't make me laugh since my dad is like that >>; but it does a lot.

I find your third piece at the bottom the most interesting because it truly reminds me a of the signs for the men's bathroom. Maybe playing with scale isn't the biggest issue for it, since most of the time those type of signs are pretty small, but maybe seeing them in different scales would help.
The only real problem I have with it is the typeface for "Samuel Beckett" I just feel as if it doesnt work with the title typeface and the logos.

Great job though! I adore them,
Caryn

Olga Type said...

isn't it a bit cliche to use handicap pictograms as your idea? you should try to step out of the box a bit. Plus, some of them happen to be similar.

Olga said...

Hi Omar, I still like your first logo idea the best. I would work on the quality of your logo in connection to your concept. Actually, we don't know exactly how you formulate your concept. It will help to sharpen your visual. I would try to connect , intertwine, continue one image (ham) to another (clove) to express the idea of a link.

Anyway, you are ready to design the interior.

I would not use serif typeface for the author.

Olga

Unknown said...

niceee, I like how u used to bathroom silhouette to be the image...but i wanna see more...remember what we do in Victore's class???we gotta push thru and do that! make something, interesting and a notch off, that would make it triumph

ps.the eye photo is POWERFUL~