this looks cool! I'm not sure which one I like better, I really enjoyed all the white space on your previous version, I feel like it really pulls you in towards ME.
Eventually, it will not be about the color. You can switch to your original if you want or change them completely, but right now, you are building your composition and black helps you to see the hierarchy of your elements better. I think that DEA can be a little darker, white lines thinner, especially at the cross-section, and the text behind —much darker—almost black. White (black) spaces bother me, I wish you filled the whole background space with your type.
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this looks cool! I'm not sure which one I like better, I really enjoyed all the white space on your previous version, I feel like it really pulls you in towards ME.
Jared and Meagan,
Eventually, it will not be about the color. You can switch to your original if you want or change them completely, but right now, you are building your composition and black helps you to see the hierarchy of your elements better. I think that DEA can be a little darker, white lines thinner, especially at the cross-section, and the text behind —much darker—almost black. White (black) spaces bother me, I wish you filled the whole background space with your type.
You are getting closer.
Olga
Forgot to mention, that Euripidus is much more important than February.
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