Friday, March 13, 2009

MEDEA Redo#2

Hey, I don't think this is what you suggested Olga.. but I do think its an improvement I like.. I'll keep playing with it too..

1 comment:

Olga Type said...

Hey Buddy of mine!

Okay so I just reviewed your previous posters and read the comment Olga put up and looked at the most recent one you did. In terms of the concept being 'ME' I completely agree that it is a terrific solution to Medea, and quite a clever observation (I must say). Nevertheless I do think that too much of a contrast between 'me' and 'dea' may be a little confusing and hard to read. Perhaps the fact that the contrast in colours is must too strong to successfully relate both sections of her name together - so you might think about altering that to increase the unity.

I do like your most recent one but I haven't gotten to the point where I say 'I HATE YOU' -- which probably means you need to do more work on it. I like the shadow with Medea very much and I think it works well with your idea. Maybe you could tone down the 'dea' to also act like a shadow?

Give me more variation. I dont believe you are there yet but you're close!

Michelle x