1. I like two dots, let them stay, but the treatment of Euripides I don't. It seems not appropriate to such a serious poster to use lowercase i-s for his name.
2. I am not sure about the combination of burgundy and bright red in Medea. Feels like it should be one color—dark. I would, probably tried to design Medea as a flat shape with "me" being a continuation of DEA in perspective. If this works, then, you can try to think more about your "Me" concept. Right now they compete.
3. Try to remove your cross-section lines at all. Make them black. See what happens
I think you are definitely progressing, your poster itself dictates you what to do. It is a good sign.
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it definetly reads better, im not sure of the colors of the lines, i dont know what to suggest, but at the sametime something bothers
Jared,
1. I like two dots, let them stay, but the treatment of Euripides I don't. It seems not appropriate to such a serious poster to use lowercase i-s for his name.
2. I am not sure about the combination of burgundy and bright red in Medea. Feels like it should be one color—dark. I would, probably tried to design Medea as a flat shape with "me" being a continuation of DEA in perspective. If this works, then, you can try to think more about your "Me" concept. Right now they compete.
3. Try to remove your cross-section lines at all. Make them black. See what happens
I think you are definitely progressing, your poster itself dictates you what to do. It is a good sign.
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