Thursday, November 27, 2008

Jared - Lord of the Flies POSTER




Hey

these are the edits that were suggested for my poster yesterday.. let me know if you think the deign is solved or not.

cheers!
jared

3 comments:

Meagan Burns said...

I don't think the images posted?

Gonzalo MuiƱo said...

mmm...

I like the shape of the circles, but I don't like the way you develop it...

I would pain it by myself, it needs to be dirtier, now is so clean, so perfect, that fights with the flies.

nice composition anyway!

:)

Meagan Burns said...

I like where it is going! Maybe to make it rougher, you could overlay a few paint strokes on the eyes? I kind of like that odd contrast though between clean and grungy.