Friday, April 1, 2011

ok i toned it down as recomended(Brian)

3 comments:

Unknown said...

yoyo, niceee gives it some room to breathe a little with the white space, better than last time. But I would say, the text on the cover is not needed...unless you wanted to make it look like newspaper or something, then i would do more to the paper it was printed on. like burn the side edges or something, idk what exactly, but ur gradually working ur way. keep it up man.

-Aye

Unknown said...

yoyo, niceee gives it some room to breathe a little with the white space, better than last time. But I would say, the text on the cover is not needed...unless you wanted to make it look like newspaper or something, then i would do more to the paper it was printed on. like burn the side edges or something, idk what exactly, but ur gradually working ur way. keep it up man.

-Aye

Olga Type said...

good job w/ the whitespace. i like the text but i would rip it up or something. keep playing with it. good luck amie.