Happy Days covers - Kelly Park

Hello,

I tried few more explorations for the cover.

Last week, you thought DIN (what I used for Samuel Beckett) suites better for the title (happy days). I like DIN's alphabet, but I do not like its punctuation. it's too rigid…

Comma and periods are my element and DIN's comma and periods look like blocks.

So should I used different typeface for punctuation or just use different typeface for title overall?

I am not sure which combination of typefaces work the best... so far...

Please help!! thank you. :)

-kelly