The second line is the inside, and I tried to make it
like the contents page from The FACE magazine, which
Brody got famous of..The third line is the cover of the brochure,
then I thought of how it would be if I made the cover also like
The Face magazine with Brody's face in it.. so I did the first line.
Now I'm just thinking of combining all three together..
2 comments:
I think the outside is super cool and interesting and I like it better than the face magazine, but it would probably be a good idea to put his face in at least one place so we know what he looks like. I also like your interior, but I think your page with the information has a bit too much information all on one page and it becomes a little too boring to read it all. What about having some information on pages with graphics? just to space it all out a little to make it easier to read?
-Ben
Hi, I agree with Ben about the business of the middle part. Text is too intense, bold—heavy. The images are simply pages from his books. I wish, you would create your own layout so that we would forget about those books and see your ability to design a spread. Text and images are just don't work together in this business.
What is your idea, concept?If this is the Face, then develop it. I actually like the idea to place his face on the cover of a magazine that he was the creator of. It is like a tribute to him, celebration of his contribution to the design world. Concentrate on his inventions. Make it more elegant.
Hope, it was helpful,
Olga
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