Jared - Lord of the Flies POSTER

Hey

these are the edits that were suggested for my poster yesterday.. let me know if you think the deign is solved or not.

cheers!

jared

Hi everyone, this is Meagan. I'm posting my brochure drafts below. The first one below is what I've been developing for the inside, and the rest is what I've been laying out for the opposite side.
I think the second one is my favorite for the back. Thanks!!

Visual Music and possible brochure/banner direction

The Raven

Hi Typefamily!

Here I am with my raven and my dead wife!

These are the different versions that I came out with this weekend.

The first one shows the story in a  very schematic way. the wife sends the raven, who lands on the statue. The man goes crazy around it, over and over again, and finally dies.

The second one is about transformation. How death becomes life and life becomes death.

The third one is from the point of view of dead. The dead wife is missing her beloved (alive) husband so Parkas sends the raven to pick him up. Then the raven comes back with the husband and they live happily forever.

:)

Gonzalo.

The Lottery poster and Visual Music silk flag

Hey this is Matt, and this is approximately what I'd like the visual music silk flag to look like (top), and an unfinished version of the pictogram with type (bottom).  Feedback is appreciated. Thanks.

Hierarchy

Hey,

Thanks Olga for 1.) sending me info for blogspot, and 2.) for being an incredibly smart/inspiring teacher.  Cheers to you.

Gonzo:: I agree you typeface is much stronger now that it is uniquely hand-drawn.  You may be able to still find a designed typeface suitable for your project but this idea is a big improvement.  It has a whimsical feel that mimics your visual music design.

Meagan:: I do like your simple poster.  It gets the idea very quickly.  But i still want more in the end, maybe you can do something with the background or unexpectedly change the readability from left to right to something that resembles swimming in a pond.

Olga stressed in class that if you have an extremely understood story, try to make it a more personal exploration and do something very different but relate it to the story.

ok, ive had enough blogging for now.  but im no longer a virgin.  haha later everyone.

jared

Symbol Poster

Hi everyone! This is Meagan, I was sick yesterday so I couldn't come to class. I'd like to ask for advice on my symbol poster to see if I'm going in the right direction. I still have work to do on ordering it and making it a bit more clear. Thanks!

New Type

Hi again type family,

here I attach you a new type, my own handwriting. I feel that the others types doesn't match very well, they are or too simple or too much...

Thanks for your help, I hope this time everyone can comment on the photo 

:)

Gonzo.

Dear Type Family:

Here I show you my ideas about what typeface should I use in my project.

Please, let me know which one of the following you think fixes better with my concept. 

The typefaces are:

1. Basetwelve

2. Intersate

3. Platelet

4. Suburbarn

I need a type who doesn't fight with my drawing, if the do it is going to be too much!

Thank you everybody, see you on Wednesday!

:)

Gonzo.