I revised my cover and made samples for interior of the book. I desperately need your opinions :'D
Thank you and Good Luck guys!!!
This is endpaper. I'm doing french binding.
first page©right page(this is french binding, this is gonna be right and left page)
second page
the list of characters
I tried to express 4 characters' movement(?) with names. Each name has different weight and movement.
Clov gets up and down with a ladder.
1 comment:
Soomin,
Very interesting! I like many things—cover, overall whiteness, treatment of the title, visual representation of the characters. Let me say what I don' like and need to be revisited—widows, the absence of hanging punctuation, heavy-weight of the text. I understand that the frame on the bottom of the text shows Clov and his movement around and up etc. Great idea if it is designed elegantly, not heavy-handed. Maybe text overlaps the text a little to soften the impression.
I like the clov moves constantly, leaving a long trace behind him, I would increase the length of the vertical movement for the trash cans residents, I would not make hamm so dark and blurry because there is not movement coming from him.
Great!
Olga
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