hey its elisa.
we talked in class today about this design, which is the climax of my music plus its going to be a cover. olga suggested that i try take out the outline and stick with one typeface. the last image is my original, and the top 3 are revisions. please check them out and let me know what you think. thanks!
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Hello Elisa, this is Eddy. I liked your original one, but I do think that the 2nd one is better. It seems to fill the space better, but it seems kind of flat. Will you be embossing the fonts or making them pop like you did in your original? Also I like the color layout in the original as well with the blue going through half of the the words, "My" and "Life". So basically I just say you do exactly what you did in your original to the 2nd version.
Hi this is Michelle from the Thursday class, I really like the outlines it really adds another dimension.
Out of the two I like the top one better.
Oh yeah also I just noticed, I like the "Life" in the original more than the "Life" in the 2nd version.
eddy, do you mean the second one from the top? what if i kept the same typeface for "life" in the new one you're talking about, but tilted the "i" like in the original?
thanks for the feedback guys!
I dont like the titled i
Hey Elisa, yeah the 2nd from the top is the 1 I like and yeah I personally think you should change the typeface back to the original "life" typeface that you had. As for the tilt in the "i" I am not sure if you really need it. I'll have to listen to the song again to see if the tilt is necessary. Might I ask why you tilted it in the first place? Also the name of your song please so I could reference it again.
Hey it's Rebecca.... I like the original version. I also like the off register ones batter than the plain colored ones. It took me a couple minutes to notice the changes in the first one (I don't know if its because I'm extremely tired or whatever). I'm all for the original I didn't really see a problem in the first place. Do you like the original? I think if you do you should keep it.
Hey it's Rebecca, again. I changed my mind (I do still like the original though) I like the second one from the top but I think it should be off register like the first and original. I really think it makes it more interesting.
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