i want to thank you guys for all your help! i couldn't figure out how to add new images to that post so i had to start a new one. here are two more versions following all your advice. please let me know one more time what you think :) personally, of these two, i like where the bottom one is going.
thanks again! you guys are great!
-elisa
7 comments:
Hey it's Rebecca...I like them both a lot.. I like the type in the second one the most, but I like the playfulness of the layout in the first one. I think the layout in the first one really describes the playfulness of the song rather than the block of type in the second.
Hey Elisa, its Eddy. Great job on the revisions of theses. I like them both a lot. its a hard choice, but if I had to pick between the two then I would go with the first one. I like the font on that 1 more than in the 2nd. Good job.
Hi Elisa, both compositions became stronger. I like the first one more, but the position of the word "GET" is not resolved yet.
I am glad to hear a real exchange of opinions, Very helpful for all of us. Thank you all.
Olga
Elisa, one more suggestion: you might want to use two small dots around GET —like dingbats. In your case, it could be an element from your Visual music cover.
my two cents.
thank you everyone for your input! i will bring the final versions to class on wednesday. you all have been a great help.
-elisa
I would have to say the first version goes better with your song rather than the second one, due to the use of a soft rounded edge on the san serif typeface that you chose to use, rather than than in the second version where the san serif and serif type faces juxtapose each other, they do both clash against each other very well but they're fighting to much and your song is a lot more care free, playful, enjoyable; it just doesn't have that sharp rift or quick beat that i'm getting from the second version. But both are well developed and are very nice typographic pieces; THUMBS UP
-Aaron
hi, it's Minjin :)
I do love both of them! and agree with Rebecca. I think if you put the color layout of the top version into the bottom version, it can be even better.
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