Matt, a very interesting interesting . Very artistic and right to the point. I think that the space above the demonstrators is totally lost. I would enlarge the portion of the image to fill more space around. Also the black big arrow on the same page leads our eyes to look to the left, white the movement of the people and the type should be read from left to right. His name on the left is a little lost, not there yet. I think you need more of the black background to create a contrast to the cover and to support the protestors: )
I like the development of the cover also, but white serif type might look weak there.
Everything about Visual music seem to come together, the only thing that bothers me is the Cd label—looks to conservative, too symmetrical—out of style.
Can't wait to touch all your wood. metal, strings, rose ...tangible stuff.
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Matt, a very interesting interesting . Very artistic and right to the point. I think that the space above the demonstrators is totally lost. I would enlarge the portion of the image to fill more space around. Also the black big arrow on the same page leads our eyes to look to the left, white the movement of the people and the type should be read from left to right. His name on the left is a little lost, not there yet. I think you need more of the black background to create a contrast to the cover and to support the protestors: )
I like the development of the cover also, but white serif type might look weak there.
Everything about Visual music seem to come together, the only thing that bothers me is the Cd label—looks to conservative, too symmetrical—out of style.
Can't wait to touch all your wood. metal, strings, rose ...tangible stuff.
Olga
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