I don't think that your last logo is better than your previous efforts. The movement of the image is repeated with the type. Seems too literal and childish.
I do like many of your logo ideas. My favorite are: #2, 3, 8, 9, and 10. Each as a potential to be a very good logo.
#2 (pink) has a strong memorable look, but the word laundry will not be readable in small size. The counter of g looks too important. Pink is arbitrary. The image of a zipped bag is totally lost. Maybe, traveling imagery might help to sharpen your idea. #3 . I would get rid of G and place go within the circle as as the beginning of your line "laundry" A zipped bag as a laundry drum is clever, #8. Is very simple, very easy to follow. all caps, 3 simple shapes, but the word laundry is not readable—same problem as in #2 #10 suggests the rotation not in a literal, but very sophisticated form. Brackets don't have to be doubled. Let the movement be within a stable bag.
GO can be typed on the top of the flat red zipper lock.
I would like to see your revisions of those logos that I mentioned. Many compliments on your way of of thinking.
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Hi Yoon,
I don't think that your last logo is better than your previous efforts. The movement of the image is repeated with the type. Seems too literal and childish.
I do like many of your logo ideas. My favorite are: #2, 3, 8, 9, and 10. Each as a potential to be a very good logo.
#2 (pink) has a strong memorable look, but the word laundry will not be readable in small size. The counter of g looks too important. Pink is arbitrary. The image of a zipped bag is totally lost. Maybe, traveling imagery might help to sharpen your idea.
#3 . I would get rid of G and place go within the circle as as the beginning of your line "laundry" A zipped bag as a laundry drum is clever,
#8. Is very simple, very easy to follow. all caps, 3 simple shapes, but the word laundry is not readable—same problem as in #2
#10 suggests the rotation not in a literal, but very sophisticated form. Brackets don't have to be doubled. Let the movement be within a stable bag.
GO can be typed on the top of the flat red zipper lock.
I would like to see your revisions of those logos that I mentioned. Many compliments on your way of of thinking.
Olga
Yoon, I think, I made a mistake at the end. I wrote about #10, but I meant #9 with a double red/bluetype.
Olga
Oh~
Thank you for your critique.
But the last logo, (which is "go laundry2")is not the thing I did.
Think somebody did for me.
YOON
I'll revise of the logos, which you mentioned:)
Thank you very much.
YOON
Good luck.
Olga
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