Jung Su, I still like this poster, but it needs some work. 1. Sophocles should be there. 2. Typeface for the title feels too "healthy" and pleasant. I feel it has to be a some condensed typeface. Can be on the top portion of the poster hidden behind the mask or transparent. 3. Oedipus can be even a little smaller. 4. I wish the mask would look down at him. it feels it looks directly to the viewer. See my comments to the other poster
1 comment:
Jung Su, I still like this poster, but it needs some work.
1. Sophocles should be there.
2. Typeface for the title feels too "healthy" and pleasant. I feel it has to be a some condensed typeface. Can be on the top portion of the poster hidden behind the mask or transparent.
3. Oedipus can be even a little smaller.
4. I wish the mask would look down at him. it feels it looks directly to the viewer. See my comments to the other poster
Post a Comment