Here is my edit for the Sum assignment, and i'd love to get some more help on it.
Thanks,
-David C.
Wednesday, February 9, 2011
Sum Assignment
Sorry for my absence today.
Here is my edit for the Sum assignment, and i'd love to get some more help on it.
Here is my edit for the Sum assignment, and i'd love to get some more help on it.
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Hi David,
what's your idea here? Are you trying to build weight and volume with the amount given in each line? I think right now it's too.. even, my eye needs to recognize thin and thick. I like the fact that it reads across the page, but make it more dramatic so the importance of information is clearer.
-Trisha
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